CCG Battletech - Fan Edition

[Diamond]

Each of your moderate or slow Steiner ‘Mechs gets +1 attack and +1 armor.

Scrap this card when it's revealed. You may activate this card only at the end of your opponent mission during which his or her units reach the target. Tap any number of your Units, these units join the battle with the opponent’s units survived. Number of your units cannot be greater than the number of opponent units. Double all damage received by the opponent’s Units.

[acefalcon]

У Левиафана последнюю фразу второго абзаца лучше переписать ИМХО так
"If there are 5 counters on this card, shuffle Leviathan into your stockpile"

[Silencer]

Спасибо, Diamond и acefalcon!

Исправления внес, картинки и текст перезалил.
Также сделал исправления у карт в сообщении от 12 октября. Если не сложно, просьба проверить исправления.

[acefalcon]

Сейчас вроде все верно

[connor1942]

Each of your moderate or slow Steiner ‘Mechs gets +1 attack and +1 armor.

Scrap this card when it's revealed. You may activate this card only at the end of your opponent mission during which his or her units reach the target. Tap any number of your Units, these units join the battle with the opponent’s units survived. Number of your units cannot be greater than the number of opponent units. Double all damage received by the opponent’s Units.

Scrap this card when it is revealed. it's в карточнике не встречается совсем.

[Silencer]

Scrap this card when it is revealed. it's в карточнике не встречается совсем.

Есть только одно исключение - название карточки "It's Trap!".

TEXT: If 'Mech piloted by Rocketman have missile option it gets +1 missile.
You may subtract 1 from the missile die roll of any missile fired by 'Mech piloted by Freelance Mechwarrior. Use this ability immediately after rolling that missile die.
Flavor TEXT:"Booze, drugs, girls ... How many soldiers died from these weaknesses! My own weakness - missiles! Many, many missiles! From it they die too!"

TEXT: Play only if you attacking a command card and it isn't blocked. One of your ‘Mech recieves X damage where X is a target’s armor.
Roll a die:
1-2: No effect.
3-6: Reduce the armor of a command card to 0.
At the end of the mission roll additional die:
1-3: Return this card to your hand after the mission.
4-6: No effect.

TEXT: Play Zeroed Position only in one of opponent’s regions and scrap all other copies of this card in that region. When artillery deal any damage to a site in this region, this site recieve additional 2 damage. During his or her Deploy phase, opponent may scrap 4 cards from Stockpile to scrap Zeroed Position.

TEXT: tap: Choose any Artillery card in your hand and deploy it. This does not count as a deployment. Use this ability only during your Deploy phase.
tap,2res Untap up to 2 Artillery cards. Use this ability only during your Missions phase, but not during a mission.

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[acefalcon]

1. Рокетмен
Правильно так: TEXT: If 'Mech piloted by Rocketman have missile option, it gets +1 missile.

2.Сквозь стены!
Правильно так: Play only if you attacking a command card and it isn't blocked

3. Штаб батареи
Не очень хорошее название для карты. Батарея - это 2-8 орудий, своего штаба не бывает. Лучше переделать в Artillery Headquarters

[Silencer]

Правильно так: Play only if you attacking a command card and it isn't blocked

По аналогии карты Unopposed

Play only if one of your Units is attacking alone and isn't blocked.

[acefalcon]

Неправильная аналогия. Структура предложений разная.

[Silencer]

Правки для предыдущих карточек сделал. Картинки перезалил.

Новые поступления:
К сожалению, не всегда получается подобрать к карточкам хороший арт. Если вдруг кто-то может предложить более красивый картинки для карточек (сделать самому, предоставить файл или ссылку), буду очень признателен.

TEXT: -3 initiative.
Prevent up to 3 damage to 'Mech piloted by Defence Master.
Flavor TEXT: So what, that base and spaceport lost? But 4 ‘Mechs rescued!

TEXT: When you activate this card, put it in your Command Post and scrap all other Terrain cards in that region.
Prevent up to 2 damage to each Artillery Command card in you Command Post.
Each of your Command card gets +X attack where X is equal to the number of Artillery cards you control. Use this ability only during a mission.
You may deploy this card revealed to make an additional deployment this turn.

TEXT: (Tap): Repair 1 damage to one of your Units.
(Tap+2R): Repair 3 damage to one of your Units.
Use this abilites only during your Repair/Reload phase.

TEXT:Play only if you deck not contains Alliance card
(tap): For each tapped Unit with VTOL option you control roll a die.
1-2: No effect.
3-4: Untap that VTOL at the end of your Missions phase.
5-6: Untap that VTOL.
Use this ability only during your Missions phase, but not during a mission.

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[acefalcon]

Defence Master
Flavor TEXT: So what, that base and spaceport are lost? But 4 ‘Mechs are rescued! (хотя по формам вспомогательных глаголов могу накосячить - но они там нужны)

The secret airbase
TEXT:Play only if you deck does not contain Alliance card
(tap): For each tapped Unit with VTOL option under you control roll a die.

Как-то так

[Leonid]

Арт у "бульварка" действительно выбивается. Фильтр Шопа наложить пробовали художественный типа "акварели"?

[connor1942]

Silencer
А чего на гуглодок не залил? Шаблончики кстати посмотри, там пока не все по основная масса уже есть.
Вот тоже кстати антиресное:


Или вот:


Добавлено спустя 2 минуты 3 секунды:

Defence Master
Flavor TEXT: So what, that base and spaceport are lost? But 4 ‘Mechs are rescued! (хотя по формам вспомогательных глаголов могу накосячить - но они там нужны)

The secret airbase
TEXT:Play only if you deck does not contain Alliance card
(tap): For each tapped Unit with VTOL option under you control roll a die.

Как-то так

Кстати не факт, там в карточках все упрощено зачастую, в плане языка.

Добавлено спустя 2 минуты 25 секунд:
Silencer
И воркшопчик-то доделай, уж дюже кривой.